I am French, is it correct to write this please?

Question

Is it correct plaese?

"I was reading an article about her performances the other day and that confirms that I am getting lost between emotion and subversion. So, Joe, do you think that art has to be subversive to be effective? Does music have to be subversive?"

thanks a lot!!

Answer 1

Subversive? Are you sure this is the word you mean? The meaning of that word seems so odd in the sentence. Does art/music have to be subversive = a strange sort of question. I'm not sure it translates to exactly what you're meaning to ask.



Also, like the other person said, change "and that confirms" to "and it confirms."



Your grammar and spelling is fine. Just not sure if you're saying exactly what you intend to say with the word subversive.

Answer 2

Yeah,it's correct

But if you want to,instead of "and that confirms that i am getting"

you could put "and it confirms that i am getting",if you mean the article confirms it

But it's correct anyway :D !!

Answer 3

correct in my opinion - did you want an answer too? if so, min = music can stir emotion(s), for people, on their own, and in a crowd the effect might be stronger.

Answer 4

Perfect vocabulary + tense! Well done mousieur

Answer 5

Yeah bro, sounds good

Answer 6

I would just insert a comma after "the other day".

Answer 7

Sounds really good