Is there an englishman who can correct me this writing in english?or simply tell me if it's ok grammatically?

mlewis3498

2009-07-10 03:59:07 UTC

It looks good to me.

Graham I

2009-07-10 04:43:06 UTC

Leandro Lehart was born in Sao Paulo in 1972.

His artistic career began very early: at just 14 years old Leandro was able to dance Samba professionally, which is one of the most important dances in Brazil. At 15 he started to experiment with new compositions and rhythms.

Still young, he founded “Art Popular”, one of the most important and well-known samba groups in Brazil, which in less than 10 years sold more than 7 million albums. The influential and high profile “Veja Magazine” named Lehart as “the greatest songwriter of the 90s”. He has recorded over 300 songs, including 3 of the 5 most played in Brazil, and 10 of the 200 most played on the radio.

A close friendship binds Lehart to the football player Ronaldo, who also appears in one his videos.

Lehart has gained so much popularity and public support that he has become the undisputed star of "Fantastic", the most important TV show on Brazilian TV Globo, the country's main television network.

He was not even thirty when he became the subject of the largest show ever produced in Brazil: MTV Brazil Unplugged - Art Popular.

Lehart owns two important recording studios which are among the best-equipped of the country, where he produces many artists and creates his own albums working side-by-side with important names from the wold of music: Billy Paul, Jorge BenJor, Take 6, Eliana Olodum...

In 2007, he released "Let me Fight For My Right", unique not just because Lehart plays all the instruments, but mainly because it manages to successfully combine Brazilian rhythms and R & B influences, world music, pop and soul: a success with both critics and the public.

His popularity led him to become involved in social issues, and he founded "O Samba Cura O Cancer" (Samba Cures Cancer), which uses Samba to help spread a culture of prevention in a difficult country. This has earned him recognition from the United Nations and has led to numerous interviews around the world.

SambaPopBrazilMestizo is his first DVD but it's a greatly successful album: Lehart duets with the historic figures of Brazilian music: Seu Jorge, Jorge Ben, Jorge Aragao, Jair Rodrigues, Alcione. With the latter, who is considered (along with Ellis Regina) the icon of Brazilian music, he performs Valeu Demais, exciting and sensual with an enthralling melody and an unmistakable rhythm.

Valeu Demais is the first single taken from the album, which will be released in the summer of 2009 in Italy with New Music International.

EDIT: I didn't like any of the other answers but Dru posted while I was typing and her answer is pretty good. She's right about the numbers, although I didn't bother with this. She's also right about using the surname - I changed my answer accordingly. You only use the full name once, because after that everyone knows who you're talking about, and if you use just the first name it implies you're a personal friend. Her advice about "the" is slightly misleading though - what she means is that you don't ALWAYS need to use it. You DO need to use it sometimes!

anonymous

2009-07-10 04:18:56 UTC

Leandro Lehart was born in Sao Paulo in 1972.

His artistic career began very early: at just about 14 years old Leandro was able to dance Samba professionally, one of the most important dances in Brazil. At 15 he started to experiment with new compositions and rhythms.

While still young, he started Art Popular one of the most important and well-known samba groups in Brazil which sold more than 7 million copies in less than 10 years . The influential high profile magazine “Veja Magazine” described Lehart as “the greatest songwriter of the 90s”. He has recorded over 300 songs: three of these are rated among the five most played in Brazil, and 10 of these among the 200 more programmed by the radio.

A close friendship binds Lehart to the football player Ronaldo, who also appears in one his videos.

Lehart has acquired additional support and popularity so as to become the undisputed star of Fantastic, the most popular TV show on Brazilian TV station Globo, the main television network in the country.

Not yet 30, he became the protagonist of the largest show ever produced in Brazil: l’MTV Brazil Unplugged/Art Popular.

Lehart acquired two important recording studios which are among the most well-equipped of the country, where he produces many artists and realizes his own albums working alongside the big names in music: Billy Paul, Jorge BenJor, Take 6,Eliana Olodum...

In 2007 he released "Let me Fight For My Right" not only unique because he played all the instruments, but because for the first time he successfully combined Brazilian Rhythm and R & B influences, world music, pop and soul: a success hailed both by audiences and critics.

His popularity allowed him to work for social causes and he founded "O Samba Cura O cancer care”: Samba dance to spread a culture of prevention in such a difficult country, for which he earned high recognition of the United Nations and numerous interviews around the world.

SambaPopBrazilMestizo is his first DVD but is also an album of great success. Lehart draws together the history of Brazilian music in the guise of his guests on the disc: Seu Jorge, Jorge Ben, Jorge Aragao, Jair Rodrigues, Alcione. With Alcione he performed the exciting “Valeu Demais”, an unmistakable, enthralling and sensuous melody.

Valeu Demais is the first single taken from Album “SambaPopbrazilMestizo” and will be released in the summer of 2009 in Italy with New Music International.

ok thereya go. your english is very good. couple of points:

1 always spell numbers under 10

2 watch over use of colons : they are used to introduce a list. we tend to use full stops otherwise.

3 when talking about a person always use the surname.

4 don't use the definite article in english. il topolino = mouse not the mouse

:)

Jamy Doja

2009-07-10 03:58:53 UTC

Leandro Lehart was born in Sao Paulo in 1972.

His artistic career began very early: at about 14 years old Leandro was able to dance professional Samba, one of the most important dances in Brazil. At 15 he started to experiment with new compositions and rhythms.

Whilst he was still young, he based the “Art Popular”, one of the most important and well-known samba groups in Brazil, which sold more than 7 million copies in under 10 years. The influential high profile magazine “Veja Magazine” pointed Leandro as “the greatest songwriter of the 90s”. He has recorded over 300 songs: 3 of these rated among the 5 most played in Brazil, and 10 of these among the 200 most played on the radio.

A close friendship binds Leandro to the player Ronaldo, who also appears in one his videos.

Leandro acquires additional support and popularity so much as to become the undisputed star of "Fantastic" the most important TV show on Brazilian TV Globo, the main television network in the country.

He was not even thirty when he became the undisputed protagonist of the largest show ever produced in Brazil: l’MTV Brazil Unplugged/Art Popular.

Leandro Lehart acquires two important recording studios among the most well-equipped of the country where he produces many artists and realizes his albums working side-by-side with important names in the musical field: Billy Paul, Jorge BenJor, Take 6,Eliana Olodum...

In 2007, he released "Let me Fight For My Right" it was unique not only because Leandro plays all the instruments, but mainly because it manages to successfully combine Brazilian rhythms and R & B influences, world music, pop and soul: a success with audiences and critics.

His popularity led him in society, and thus founded "O Samba Cura O cancer care: Samba dance to spread a culture of prevention in such a difficult country, makes him earning the high recognition of the United Nations and numerous interviews around the world.

SambaPopBrazilMestizo is his first DVD but is also an album of great success: Leandro duets with the history of Brazilian music, all his guests on the disc: Seu Jorge, Jorge Ben, Jorge Aragao, Jair Rodrigues, Alcione. With the latter, considered along with Ellis Regina 's icon of Brazilian music, performs Valeu Demais, melody enthralling, exciting and sensual with an unmistakable rhythm.

Valeu Demais is the first single taken from Album “SambaPopbrazilMestizo” which will be released in the summer of 2009 in Italy with New Music International.

R@bi

2009-07-10 04:09:29 UTC

its too good english , even you declare that you didnt know well english...

Leandro acquires additional support and popularity to become the undisputed star of "Fantastic" the most important TV show on Brazilian TV ...........

Leandro Lehart "acquired"(not acquires) two important recording studios among the most well-equipped of the country where he produces many artists and realizes his albums working side-by-side with important names of the musical field...

SambaPopBrazilMestizo is his first DVD but (not include is also) an album of great success:

anonymous

2009-07-12 01:08:09 UTC

sounds fine

Henrietta

2009-07-10 04:03:08 UTC

Its perfect as it is - well done and good luck