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Question

However, China still names itself as a communism country. It still has many differences and arguements with western. Economically, China has made a huge progress since it reformed. It helps china from one of the poorest country become the second biggest economy in this world. It only takes about 20 years and nowadays people had started to predict when will china overcome the super power U.S.

On the other hand, china also pays for the globalization, those negative aspect of globalization could be best to show what China has lost. First, because the globalization, China has to make deal with the world, which means the government of China(Communism party) can not do whatever they want to do. Second, the globalization let more people go to China. One day, the western media may be able to there as well which may undermine the power of goverment harshly. Third, In China, the income disparity also polarized the rich and poor to a serious scale. During 1978 to 1996, the real GDP grew on average by over 9 per cent a year. The living standard has been considerably
improved due to the economic reform launched in 1978. The policy was “letting few people get rich first” through special, preferential policies, which became the dominant reason for the widening gap of rich and poor pose in China. This undermines the stablity of China. Fourth, since China joined the world, outside of china, people pay much more attention on it, the bad human rights record, the issues of Taiwan and Tibet have been criticized by western. Inside of
China,more people have been abroad and more MNGs have opened in China, both of them will influence the stability of the government.

Answer 1

China is a communist country. It still has many diffenences and arguments with western countries. China has made huge economical progress since reforms were initiated. Prior to reform China was a very poor country. Now it is the worlds second largest economy. Recovery took about twenty years and many now wonder when it will overtake the U.S.A. as the world leader.

On the other hand China is paying a price for it's new globalization. China has to interact with foreign countries. This means the communist Chinese goverenment can no longer do whatever they want. The new globalization is also bringing more people to China. One day, the western media may be able to report from there as well, which could undermine the power of the harsh government. The new economy has created an income disparity that polarizes the rich and poor remarkably. From 1978 to 1996 the real GDP grew on average by over nine percent a year. The living standard has been considerably improved due to the economic reforms launched in 1978. The policy was "letting few people get rich first" through special preferential policies, thus creating the widening economic gap. This undermines the stability of China. Another effect to China of joining the world economy is that outsiders are now paying a lot more attention to the internal acctivities of China. Their bad human rights record and continued domination of Tibet and Taiwan have drawn critisism from the west. Inside China more citizens have traveled abroad and more MNGs have opened in China, both of which will influence goverenment stability.





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Answer 2

However, China still names itself as a communism country. It still has many differences and arguements with the west. Economically, China has made huge progress since it reformed. It helps china go from being one of the poorest country to having the second biggest economy in this world. It only took about 20 years and nowadays people had started to predict that china will overcome the U.S. as a super power.



On the other hand, china also pays for the globalization, these negative aspects of globalization could be best to show what China has lost. First, because of globalization, China has had to make a deal with the world, which means the government of China(Communist party) can not do exactly what they want to do. Second, the globalization let more people go to China. One day, the western media may be allowed to go there as well which may undermine the power of goverment harshly. Third, In China, the income disparity also polarized the rich and poor on a serious scale. During 1978 to 1996, the real GDP grew on average by over 9 per cent a year. The living standard has been considerably

improved due to the economic reform launched in 1978. The policy was “letting few people get rich first” through special, preferential policies, which became the dominant reason for the widening gap of rich and poor pose in China. This undermines the stablity of China. Fourth, since China joined the world, outside of china, people pay much more attention to it, the bad human rights record, the issues of Taiwan and Tibet have been criticized by the west. Inside of

China,more people have been abroad and more MNGs have opened in China, both of them will influence the stability of the government.

Answer 3

China still names itself as a communist country. It still has many differences and arguements with the western countries. Economically, China has made huge progress since it reformed. It helped China from being one of the poorest country to becoming the second biggest economy in this world. It will only take about 20 years and people have started to predict when China will overcome the superpower that is the United States.



On the other hand, China also pays for the globalization. The negative aspects of globalization could be to show what China has lost. Because of the globalization, China has had to make deals with the world, which means the government of China (a Communist party) can not do whatever they want to do. Second, the globalization let more people into China. One day, the western media may be able to be there as well which may undermine the power of their goverment harshly. Third, In China, the income polarized the rich and poor to a serious scale. From 1978 to 1996, the real GDP grew on average by over 9 cents per year. The living standard has been considerably

improved due to the economic reform launched in 1978. The policy was to “let few people get rich first” through special, preferential policies, which became the dominant reason for the widening gap of rich and poor classes in China. Lastly, since China joined the world, people pay much more attention on it which includes the bad human rights record and the issues of Taiwan and Tibet. In China, more people have been abroad and more MNGs have opened, both of them will greatly influence the stability of the government.

Answer 4

Here is what I would do, being a USA English Native speaker



However, China still CALLS ["names" is not really used in this way] itself [delete "as"] a communism country. It still has many differences and arguements with western [the western world?]. Economically, China has made [delete "a"] huge progress since it [has] reformed. [China has jumped from one of the world's poorest countries to the world's second largest economy]. [It is predicted that China will overtake USA's economy in the next 20 years].



On the other hand, china also pays for the globalization, those negative aspect of globalization could be best to show what China has lost [sorry, this sentence doesn't make sense to me]. First, because the globalization, China has to make deal with the world, which means the government of China([Communism]) can not do whatever they want to do. Second, the globalization let[s] more people go to China. [someday], the western media may be able to there as well which may undermine the power of goverment harshly. Third, In China, the income disparity also polarized the rich and poor to a serious scale. [from] 1978 to 1996, the real GDP grew on average by over 9 [percent is one word] per cent a year. The living standard has [delete "been"] considerably

improved due to the economic reform launched in 1978. The policy was “letting [a] few people get rich first” through special, ["preferential" is reduntant/not necessary] policies, which became the dominant reason for the widening gap of rich and poor pose in China. This undermines the stablity [stability] of China. Fourth, since China joined the world, [other countries] pay [delete "much"] more attention on it[.] the bad human rights record, the issues of Taiwan and Tibet have been criticized by western [media]. [Within][delete "of"]

China,more people have been abroad and more MNGs [what are MNG's?] have opened in China, both of [which] will influence the stability of the government.





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Answer 5

Too long to read.

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