Question:
French sentence correction?
LoLo
2012-01-28 21:18:24 UTC
I don't know how else to word this in French. Any help would be appreciated. I am supposed to avoid using the word etre.

What I want to say: She sees a huge mountain encrusted with calcified rock. Little gray rocks outline the pond.
How I wrote it: Elle voit une immense montagne incrustee d'un rocher calcifie. Petites pierres grises contours de l'etang

Thank you!
Three answers:
dogtags40
2012-01-28 21:30:09 UTC
Elle voit une immense montagne incrustée de pierre calcifiée. Des petits galets gris [des petites roches grises] entourent l'étang.
smubbsywoo
2012-01-30 00:29:42 UTC
Elle voit une immense montagne incrustée de roc calcifié. Des petits caillous gris contourent l'étang.
Lupus Mortis
2012-01-29 05:29:10 UTC
De petites pierres grises dessinent le contour de l'étang.


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