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Brian wasn't feeling well. He tought he had a disease.

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The doctor tells him he has a disease called protozan.

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Then the doctor told Brian that the disease he had protozan it invalding to the blood cells. The White blood cell will help destroy the virus.

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So after that brian asked the doctor if he could have treatment and the doctor gave him treatment

Answer 1

Brian wasn't feeling well. He thought he had a disease. The doctor tells Brian that he has a virus called Protozan. The doctor then tells Brian that the virus, Protozan, is infecting his blood cells and that the white blood cells will help destroy it. After that, Brian asked the doctor for treatment and the doctor gave him some medicine.

Answer 2

Brian wasn't feeling well; he thought he had a disease. The tells him he has a disease called protozan. Then the doctor told Brian that the diease, protozan, is invalding to the blood cells. The white blood cells will help destroy the virus. Afterwards, Brian asked if he could have treatment, and he was given treatment.



Thats how i would revise these sentences, hope i helped

Answer 3

Brian wasn't feeling well. He thought he had a disease.

(Added an H to tought)



The doctor tells him that he has a disease.

(Added the word that)



Then the doctor told Brian that the disease he had was protozan. It's invalding to the blood cells. The white blood cells will help to destroy the virus.

(Addes was, 's (is), cells instead of cell, to.



So after that, Brian asked the doctor if he could have the treatment and the doctor gave him the treatment.

(Added ( ,) the (two times.)





Guys, the task tells him to correct the sentences, not change them :)

Answer 4

Ok. I'll give you the whole thing.



Brian wasn't feeling well. He thought he had a disease. The doctor told him that he had a disease called protozan. Then the doctor told Brian that the disease he had, which is protozan, is invalding to the blood cells. The white blood cells would help destroy the virus. So after that, Brian asked the doctor if he could have treatment, and the doctor gave him the treatment.

Answer 5

Brian wasn't feeling well so he went to the doctor to get a check up.



Brian thought that he might have a disease. In conclusion the doctor



told Brian that he did have a disease which was called protozan. The



doctor also informed him that the disease was incapacitating his



blood cells. Brian was scared and asked the doctor if the disease is



curable. The doctor than gave him a treatment, and informed him



that the white blood cells will also help destroy the virus.

Answer 6

Brain was not feeling well, and thus thought he had a disease.



The doctor told Brian that he has a disease called "Protozan"



The doctor then told Brian that the diseas that he has called "Protozan" was invalding to the blood cells. The white blood cell coulds help destroy the virus.



Brian then asked if he could have a treatment for his disease, the doctor gave him his needed treatment.

Answer 7

Since Brian wasn't feeling well, he thought he had a disease. He goes to the doctor and the doctor tells him he is diagnosed with a disease called protozan. The doctor also tells Brian that a treatment could be made to resolve this problem by inserting more white blood cells which will destroy the virus. Finally, Brian asked for the treatment and the doctor gave it to him.

Answer 8

Brian was not feeling well, He thought he had a disease.



The doctor tells him that he has a disease called Protazan..



Then the doctor told Brian that Protozan, the disease he had was being spread to the blood cells. The white blood cell though will help destroy the virus.



So after that Brian asked the doctor if he could have treatment and so the doctor gave him a prescription..





Thats how it should be x

Answer 9

"Brian was not feeling well. He thought that he had a disease".



I'm not sure if 'tought' was a typo or not but the above

sentence is correct.



"The doctor told him he had a disease called protozan."



"Then the doctor told Brian, that the protozan disease was affecting the blood cells. The White blood cell could help destroy the virus."



"So after that, Brian asked the doctor if he could have treatment and the doctor prescribed him some medicine."

Answer 10

Ok, i''l write the whole paragraph corrected:



Brian wasn't feeling well, he thought he was sick.

He went to the doctor, and he told him that he had a disease called protozoan.

Then the doctor told Brian that this disease,protozoan, invades the blood cells, but the white cell will help him destroy the virus.

Brian asked about the treatment, so the doctor started it immediately.

Answer 11

Brian wasn't feeling well. He THOUGHT THAT he had a disease.



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The doctor TOLD him THAT he has a disease KNOWN as protozan

Answer 12

Just a note...protozoan is a type of bacterial organism, so the disease is CAUSED by protozoa, not the name of the disease.

Answer 13

brian had to get the poop so he went to the fireman to get a hotdog so his baby could play with the dog

Answer 14

Do your own English homework.

Answer 15

whhhhhhhhat?