English speakers, please, Which of these two translations is correct?

Question

I am luxemburgish. And i never lernead english. I play a game made by americains, they do not like my german, and they do not like my french. so they reject me because i can't speak english. I asked to a french (NUMBER ONE) and to a french Canadian to help me translating. (NUMBER TWO)

WHAT IS THE most CORRECT ?
i am not really convinced by the version beta ,in my point of view , the biggest mistake is bringing at once a big update instead of making it better progressively. it's fun ,yes ... the water system is better now , the ships and the trees are good even if the arrows thrown by archers miss all the targets , where is the strategy now ? it looks like a crossover between spider man and naruto
explosins every 2 seconds ,the new choice of characters is ridiculous , then we die without understanding why , that's what bothers me the most .we need more time to put a new startegie a good one and to make of use the new content
i am not a fan of it was better , but this is what i felt when i played
even with the bugs,the old design and the stupid angry kids , i will remain a real nostalgic fun of the alpha version


NUMBER TWO
I am not convinced at all by the Beta version. I believe that the biggest error was to publish a biggest release at once instead of progressively imporve the game. Of course, some features are fun... the water system is improved, the boats and trees are amusing, archers' arrows miss all their targets... There is no room for strategy anymore ? It feels like a Spiderman / Naruto crossover. There are explosions every two seconds, the new functionality to choose a character is ridiculous and when we die, we cannot really know why... I thing that's what bugs me the most. There is not enough time to set a real strategy plan or use wisely the new features. Usually, I am not a "it was better before" player type... However, that's how I feel since I played it. Even with its bugs, old design and its enraged idiots kids, I stay nostalgic for Alpha version.


I have a friend who is bilingual, but his american mentality is sick and he refuses to help me. Tell me what is the most translation appropriated.

Thank you very much

Answer 1

Number 2 is the best. Though if I may put in my own .02.



I am not really convinced at all by the Beta version. I think the biggest problem was releasing one big update instead of progressively improving the game. Of course, some features are fun... the water system is improved, the boats and trees are amusing, archers' arrows miss all their targets, etc. Though, there is no room for strategy anymore, it all feels like a Spiderman/Naruto crossover. There are explosions every two seconds, the new character choices are ridiculous, and when I die, I'm not really made aware why, I think that's what bugs me the most. Also, there's not enough time to create a real good strategy or wisely use the new mechanics. Usually I'm not the player who says "It was better before", however, that is how I feel. Because despite Alpha's bugs, old design, and it's enraged idiots kids, I still prefer it.



I used 2 as the basis and just cleaned stuff up like grammar, etc. Hope it helps!

Answer 2

try using a translator like Im translator. Use the back translator option to make sure it is translated correctly, then change some words until it makes sense. Number 2 is best, but:



the water system is improved, the boats and trees are amusing, -> the water graphics have been improved, and the boats and trees are more realistic. ("amusing" does not make sense. It means humorous or funny. For example, Monty Python is amusing.)



Tell me what is the most translation appropriated. -> Tell me which translation is best.

Answer 3

Number two by far